Monday, 27 December 2010

Main Task- Script

'The Whisperer'(first draft)
The majority of the first scene(before the flashback),is silent as it only involves the main character(Alicia) and the figure, who is constantly in the distance. I also think that the lack of dialog in this scene is appropriate because it adds to the suspense.

Scene One:
(Girl heavy breathing and crying historically,shot zooms out to reveal a figure behind the girl)Figure:(heavy whispers) Aliiiiiciiaaaa...Aliciiia...Liiiicccccciiaaaa..(whispers get louder and louder as figure gets closer) Aliiiicccciiiiaaaaaa?????


Alicia: (Looks around petrified) Leave Me Alone..Pleaseee!!(Pleading with the figure to leave her,still crying,fear in her voice).
(Figure appears right behind her)(Alicia Screams)
(Figure disappears,Alicia staggers around,looking around nervously)
Alicia: (Heavy breathing,gasping) 


Scene Two
(Flashback to how everything started)(Alicia walks out of a party,looks cold,gets her phone out her back and calls her friend)



AliciaHey Chlo,listen can i ask you a favor?? Like i know your at home with Darren and everything but...
Chloe: Go on Al..Whats up?
Alicia: It's just i went to Abi's party after all,but then Joe started being really fucking weird like, he started to scare me.
ChloeHaha..Really?? See i told you to watch him..So what's that favor you wanted anyway??
AliciaI walked out of the party..and i don't think i can show my face in there again..not after Joe chased me out the house with his fucking trousers round his ankles(chuckles)..Will you come pick me up?? Please??
Chloe:Haha Babe,i would but i can't.. Darren forgot to fill it up with petrol the little bastard! I'll call ya tomorrow yeah?(Hangs Up).(Alicia is left to walk home alone in the dark,starts to walk slowly)(Sudden tap on her shoulder,she thinks it's Joe)
Alicia: Whats wrong with you Joe?? Can't you take No as an answer..Just leave me alone.(Taps again)
Alicia: For Fu....(turns around to face something, but that defiantly isn't Joe)(Figure puts hand over Alicias mouth)
Alicia: (Gasps for breath)

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